Thursday, February 19, 2009

Death Ablaze

Love is death set ablaze.
The side effects are costly when it appears.
Death is the game love plays

The trouble with love is the maze
Its merciless and ruthless, unworthy of tears.
Love is death set ablaze


It will pull your heart into a craze
And that is when death is near
Death is the game love plays

The whole world seems to be in a haze
Because you ignore the warnings you hear
Love is death set ablaze

The damage love has done will never raise
If only you knew not to let love steer
Death is the game love plays

So when you realize the role love plays
You allow death to destroy all fear.
Love is death set ablaze
Death is the game love plays

1 comment:

APLITghosts said...

When you work with those abstract nouns, limit them. Go more for the concrete to root it in the specific and personal. sometimes the concrete words can be more specific. elmeer